To make my vox pops interviews, I created a question related to one of my news stories and then asked five people around college the question.
One problem I came across was when I was trying to collect my interviews from the microphone. I overcame this by asking the technician and finding out that I needed to turn the microphone off.
One key rule for writing a radio script is to use the five Ws and firstly write those into the script. If you have anymore free time, then you can add more information. Also, if you can’t say a complicated word, then you should try writing it phonetically. Another key rule is to not use abreviasions because the audience may not know what they mean.
One criticism of my script was that I said “striking ” too much. To improve my work, I re-worded the news story to take out the majority of times I said the word “striking”.
Cue in: Good afternoon, I’m Jess Bradley. (namecheck)
The government is imposing a 20% tax on sugary drinks and snacks in hospital cafes.
The tax is to combat obesity in the UK and has been backed by celebrity chef Jamie Oliver.
We asked students and staff if there should be a ban on the sale of sugary snacks in colleges.
Lilly Turner, 18, a public services student at Hillsborough said “……..”
OUT WORDS: Hillsborough said
DURATION: 21 seconds
This year, junior doctors are striking.
Since 12th January doctors across the country are striking due to being asked to work seven days a week.
This is the first strike by junior doctors in 40 years leading to 17 day surgeries and 180 outpatient appointments being cancelled in Hull and East Yorkshire.
OUT WORDS: East Yorkshire
DURATION:18 seconds
Since December, squirrels across Yorkshire are gaining weight.
Because of the warmer winter, squirrels have been eating their food storage as well as the food regularly available.
OUT WORDS: regularly available
DURATION: 9 seconds
Cue Out: This is Sound Radio
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